Great fixes, Manojalpa. I'm sure once we see the game we might be able to tweak it more but that works. Sorry I didn't get back to your PM ylyu5 but you got taken care of.
Thanks Manojalpa and don't feel sorry Sinecure Industries, in fact I am already very happy to have so many people concerns with my situation
Manojalpa's corrections are spot on. There are a couple of stylistic things I'd do differently: reject or accept at your preference. I'd replace "Every time you step on a platform you will restore some HP. This is the only way to keep yourself healthy!" with "Keep stepping on new platforms to stay alive!". I think it communicates the same idea but is more actively phrased and snappy. Are BOOST JET, BALLOON and SHIELD powerups? Then I'd say "- Collect BOOST JET, BALLOON and SHIELD powerups to travel deeper!" "5 different difficulties are included!" seems a slightly clumsy phrasing to me, I'd use "caters for all skill levels with 5 difficulty settings!"
