-Here's some criticism.. Houses/buildings in classic iphone aren't THAT big (the outside level). Most beginners like to make them huge, but you should really make them a lot smaller. Also, you made TOO many poles for the bottom of your building.. It may be a problem, and look extremely weird in my opinion. Usually poles are best for the sides of a building, or if you want to use them as fences, go ahead. It's also best to use A LOT of images, though it may be laggy for iphone players, it's best for PC players. Also, I don't think those Chimneys on the roof is necessary. Usually at least 1-3 of those are fine. You should make some grass details though. -The indoor level? Yeah, it's okay and plain. That's Classic iPhone's style. But if you were doing a level app for Unholy Nation, or what ever, it might literally "suck ass". Because you'l face a LOT of trolls once you eventually move onto working on real PC servers in the future. BTW: Don't get me wrong, your doing fine, but if you keep practicing you'd get better eventually just like what happened to me. I sucked badly when I first started, everyone did. So take criticism, don't get mad unless your getting trolled at. So please take it as no offence, I give criticism to everyone . I'm not too good myself either. Here's a picture of my levels from Cypheria. Some of my doors are images and used to go through cool buildings instead of going inside them. NOTE: It's not even closed to being finished, so theres no actual details on the cliffs or the west side of the level. Just visit Dev Morning for a tour of the server so far.
NYN just has to go through puberty because he obviously hasn't I fully agree with this post he is never never ever mature. Seriously he doesn't even take resposibility for saying "retarded" it just isn't right.
You know what NYN. Admins have jailed so many people for no reason. NYN if you really wanna help graal, how about first no more owning a guild. Admin guilds always take forts, some admins even jail people to get them. They completely messed up the forts, and because of that lots of guilds from the past died.
Lol I take it all back. I love this thread. Btw I do take responsibility. I said it, therefore I take responsibility in saying it. See how it works? It's a joke, chill out kid.
Oh well... uh... my ipod account owns Magic and if you notice I don't really sign on it anymore. They run the guild themselves, I don't participate in taking towers anymore because I agree with you, but I will help out on my ipod if they need it.
Uhh well the fact that y'all have made me the enemy because i posted bohemian rhapsody lyrics (I thought it was funny : p) i guess makes you a little prone to picking out annoying or Weird stuff in my speech. I was simply defending myself from Jordanracer that last post. Really for constantly talking about how much of an "errogant-trolling smart ass" I've become when really; I'm completely the same. For some reason ya'll don't want me to be the same and literally TRY to impose these ideas you've made on me. The ONLY reason I'm still posting here is because I still care about y'all and don't want to leave this community even after I quit. Well you're getting your wish by constantly bombarding me with this crap. Thanks for nothing. Whatever..... :/
Stop arguing. We really don't need another flamewar. This means you fireball. And don't mistake what I'm saying. It's ok to have an opinion. But if you think you can do better, why dont you apply. Or, contact the staff via email and express your complaints politely and minus the insults. I certainly wouldnt want to help you if you insulted me. Heck, Id probably go out of my way to do exactly as you yelled at me about specifically to you. And like I mentioned earlier, GPs dont get paid so they need some perks for the job. Oh, and Pimp. Didnt you just say you were done on this thread?
yea. i just dont want people having a negative opinion of me being an annoying trolling asshole here.... (when im not X_X [read last post] ) I guess i should try thinking more about what i think about myself, and less of what others think about me... I have a real problem about that X_____X
1.) You emails hardly every get read as there are thousands of emails per day clogging up the mailbox. 2.) A GP's payment for working is their free heads/hats/or whatever, along with playing around dancing on random buildings jailing kids along the way who attack their girlfriend. Actually, no one gets paid on ANY server. It's all volunteer and it's a game where you play as a staff - your paying to BE one.
Hey, just in case anybody wanted to know, Tig put up an update on GK iPhone's status! Here is the link: http://forums.graalonline.com/forums/showthread.php?t=134261526 And Fireball, that was not funny >.< We all make spelling mistakes... Even the people who get hired for writing for a server (like me ). Don't worrect people >.< You've made plenty of mistakes. Only mature corrections in an arguemnet are corrections in logic. Once you resort to correcting somebody's English, that means you lost.
First of all, for me it takes like 7 hours or so to get the emails read. Second of all, thats kinda what i was saying when I said "perks"... that includes the dancing and showboating you mentioned. Also, I believe you are not charged to be staff... Im pretty sure you get like a vip pass or something to the server you are staff on.
Don't get b****y and just look for errors when you are corrected yourself... It just makes you seem like a d-bag.
Thanks for the help. I looked at the level attached there and kind of took the style and incorporated into my outside level. I added cliffs and a lot of detail :-D On my inside level I made it a treehouse. It's not that detailed but I kind of rushed on it. I focused more on scripting. The lanterns turn off realistically when you say "off" and turn back on with a slow fade-in effect if you say "on". (And that NPC Guy talks a lot and tells you about it.)
Well This is my final post here. I started posting here waaay back in may back when zovers and crew were still here. I miss those days, but times have changed; so forgive me for being sentemental adios from your friendly neighborhood Burgerman. Thanks for the ride. :] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE WEIRD PIC OF THE DAY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ EDITORS COMMENTS: "It was fun.... <3" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ CHECK BACK FOR MORE WEIRD PICS OF THE DAY EVER-.... WAIT.. OH YEAH.... DONT BOTHER DOING THAT SRY.
