Whoo my post is too long Part I: http://forums.toucharcade.com/showpost.php?p=779178&postcount=12 Level 11 - Frozen Blood It's a forest. Snow is allover, but you can see blood at the snow. After John has left the laboratories, he returned to the WZK-Headquarters. He looked after laboratories in Canada and found an interesting clue: The abandoned Yerlee Institute for stem-cell research. With a jeep and some munition John leaves the WZK and drives to Canada. At a forest near the Institute his jeep runs out of petrol and John has to walk through the frosty territory. - After the level - John: Well, I think the Institute isn't abandoned anymore. John: I need a plan, how to get in the institute. Level 12 - A zombie odyssee At this chapter there is a lot of story at first before the level begins It was easy for John to get in the Institute, because there were no security. The Institute was a big bulding and the storefront was hard damaged. The corridors were empty and John met no-one in the building. Was he in the right building ? Then he saw a open door. He heard someone cry. Slowly he advanced to the door. John: Oh my.... MARY ! Mary: John ! John ! I am so happy to see you. John: I thought that they made cruel experiments with you. Mary: No. They only detaind us and they impended us. John: Oh Mary.... Mary: JOHN BEWARE ! Suddenly John felt a heavy headace. He heard his wife cry and then was everything black.... John: Ohh.... where I am ? Alkatras: Hahahaha.... . Nice to see you, John. John: What ? Alkatras ? But how can that be ? I have killed you. Alkatras: Well. Let me explain something. John: ... Alkatras: Yes I was dead. Alkatras: After you have killed me and left your house, some of my scientist friends get my corpse and brought me to the secret laboratories under Sowana. Alkatras: They have invented a liquid, which is more powerful than the old. Alkatras: Whith this remedy they wanted to reanimate me. Alkatras: A person followed you and informed my scientists about you. Alkatras: You should die in the plane and the man spread the virus. Alkatras: Badly you could survive and we had to flee, without the remedy for me. John: And why do you have abduct Mary. Alkatras: Well, we abducted her, that you bring us the remedy. Alkatras: The scientist in the laboratories told you a lie. Alkatras: Your family was healthy. Alktaras: You stupid fool brought us the remedy and i could be reanimated. John: You sick bastard. Alkatras: Hehehe.... . I hate your diction. Alkatras: But when the zombies have frazzled you you can't say those rude words anymore. Alkatras: Bye Bye. In 2 hours there are only bones left. John: ARG ! After Alkatras has left his cell, John thinks about evacuation plan. Suddenly the cell door opens and zombies get in. He finds his gun under his T-Shirt. John: Showtime. - After the level with a cool mutant boss- Alkatras: You are too late John. But your effort to beat me surprises me. Alkatras: I'll let your family free. But can you lead them out ? John: I'll get you ! Level 13 - Be free or die 2 Mary: John, we have to get out. John: Yes. Follow me ! Jack: Daddy I am scared. John: Don't worry Jack. Daddy will lead us out. - After the level with 3 bosses - After John and his family escaped from the institute they flee into the forest and try to get to the next town. John: We will rent us a nice cottage in New-York and I stay some weeks at home. Mary: Oh John... . Level 14 - World Zombie Killers - Headquarter An headquarter-scenery. Allover are walls with symbol of the WZK. Blood covers the walls and desks,chairs and cupboards a lying around. 2 weeks later TV: ... and so the WZK-Headqarters have to be under quarantine. At the moment it is not possible to defead the zombies at the WZK..... John: What ? Zombies at the WZK-Headquarters ? John: Mary I have to go. Mary: John no, please ! John: I've woked there Mary ! Mary: Take care ! - After the level with a huge boss- Alkatras: Ohhhh John. Nice to meet you. John: Soon you are death, Alkatras. Alkatras: Really ? Level 15 - Last man standing This level should be the last level. Here should be the game concept different. You have to fight against one very hard boss. Sometimes there come some zombies. Alkatras: Show me your skills. - BOSS FIGHT I - John: Do you want to say something, before I kill you ? Alkatras: You haven't still won fool. Alkatras takes a injection and mutates into an big green monster. Alkatras: I am more powerful now. You can't win anymore. - BOSS FIGHT II (Alkatras has some realy powerful special attaks) John: And you have lost again. Give up Alkatras. Alkatras: NO, that ..... can't be !!! Alkatras grows bigger and bigger. John runs away and try to escape. Alkatras gets John (alkatras is huge now). He tries to free himself. Alkatras: Hehehehe.... finaly I beat you. John: Dream on Alkatras ! John draws his weapon and shoots between Alkatras eyes. Alkatras head blows up and his body falls on the ground. John can free himselve and leaves the WZK-Headquarters. John: That was our last meeting Alkatras. Police Officer: Hey what do you do here ? John: I killed the zombies. Police Officer: What are you a WZK-Member ? John: Yes. And my motto is: Be free, or die. Whoo... that story was a lot of typing work. But I hope it was it worth.
I like your story Dodger123, but it seems a bit too much like the stereo-typical zombie story. It also seems like it is getting too complicated to express in a few short scenes. If you can change the story just a bit, it would be perfect.
My zombie story Dead Woods Chapter - You woke up in the dead woods. Next to you is your sergent who ask you to drive to the barracks previously. He looks motionless and dead. There are teeth marks on his neck. You found a rifle next to his body and took it up. The police car is vacant. The next thing you know is a zombie charging towards you. You sling that rifle up your hand and fire a shots at the zombie. He die crying out a ghostly scream that sends chill down your spine. You decide to explore around. More zombies come up to you. You reload your rifle and fire a few rounds at them. You decide to find a vehicle to drive out of this woods to the nearest town for help. What is the source of this madness going around you? You asked yourself in your mind. The woods are deadly quiet and virtually there isn't any sign of life around you. You found a poster that says "Destroy the devil" at your feet. Who is the devil the poster is referring to? The words are written in blood. Before you know it, a huge red flying creature fly towards you and lift you up into the skies. The creature flown you up in the clouds and suddenly let go of you. You drop into the depths of the unknown. Scary Town Chapter - The creature has dropped you in the farmhouse. Luckily, there are some hay to break the fall. Your back is aching. You reach for the door of the farmhouse. Outside of you is a town. Most of houses look vacant. You walk towards the steakhouse and try to find people inside. Behind you comes a growling unfriendly sound. You swing your hand back at the person and he uses force to send you back sprawling to the ground. There is a shotgun next to you. You reach out for the gun and fire a few shots at the undead. The mystery deepens. Why is everywhere I go has the smell of the dead? You decide to explore the house on the hills. Haunted House Chapter - You walk in the streets discreetly hiding in shadows, avoiding the detection of the zombies. Finally, you reach the gate of the house on the hills. The house look vacant from the outside. You press the door knob and it fell off. Your goosebumps suddenly come up. A unpleasant voice send the words "now you are mine, John!" right across your ears. Right in front of you is Jane. She is your finance. But her appearance has changed. She looks transparent and you cannot reach out and touch her. You asked her what is happening around you. She explained that the town is infested with zombies after a military experiment went wrong. The experiment sent people turning into zombies mutants after the river - the source of the town's water supply is polluted with the chemicals. Jane told you that she was attacked by a zombie and she killed herself to prevent her to turning like the rest of the zombies. Your heart pities her misfortune. She told you you got to find the mad scientist who has the antidote and set things right again in the town. Extreme Fight Chapter - You arrive at the outskirts of the town holding the remaining bullets of your rifle. You know that you got to avenge Jane, because she died unfairly. It isn't her fault at all. In front of you is the chemical lab where the source of trouble begins. You reach for the barred wires fences and crawled up your way to the gate exit. There is a security guard who found you! You let off two rounds of bullets towards the direction of the guard and he fell with a cry. Now you got to find the mad scientist and put an end to this. The lab really looks like a maze with no tell tale signs of which directions you should go. You toss the coin to decide your direction and turned left. You found a person wearing white cape who look like the mad scientist. You followed him discreetly. Be Free or Die Chapter - The mad scientist is healing the wounds of the red creature which flew you up above the skies previously. He seems to be talking to that creature. You tried to get a glimpse of the creature's face. To your surprise, he look like the mayor of the town! With an evil laugh, the mad scientist said, "Now everyone is in my control. I get to rule the whole town and with you to protect me from the rest of the zombies!" The devilish red creature spotted you and made out a loud cry to alert the scientist. The scientist command the creature to attack you. You reach out for your gun and fired a few shots again. But alas! This time, the red creature is immune to your attacks. It sent a punch and you fly out of the window and landed outside of the building. You pick yourself up and found tons of zombies around you. You wondered whether you will survive this mad zombie apocalypse? You begin firing the remaining rounds of your bullets and wish the daylight come sooner...
I think akame or sunrisemoon have just about won the comp. its not final but thats who i am voting for so hard to pick lol ok im sending in my vote!!! (im on the board )
Great, and the winner is . akame. Congratualations!!! Thanks guys for participations there are a lot of nice ideas. I will try to summarize everything and finally we will have a good story line. I will post a final story in a forum. There still one contest running: http://forums.toucharcade.com/showthread.php?t=40478 Please help me to organize it .
