$15 gift card reward. The best game story (Be Free Or Die Zombies)

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  1. stubbornmoose

    stubbornmoose Well-Known Member

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    $15 gift card reward. The best game story (Be Free Or Die Zombies)

    To make it easier for you guys to participate I have decided to make it free for a couple of days. So you can install it, play with it, comment on it and
    win a real money ;) Oh well, not directly but as a reward I will provide a $15 dollar iTunes gift card to the winner.

    How it works:

    Install this application for free, play with it for a while. As you can see there is no story in this game, just “kill them all”. So think about how it should be, write a story for each level or even stories for new levels.
    Let your imagination run wild ;)

    I will create a committee (by the way anyone can apply, only a real gamers of course) and they will choose a winner.
    There will be only one winner though and he will get a reward iTunes card.

    What should this story be about?
    Anything you want ;)

    When the contest ends?
    Take your time, not earlier than next Monday, but it could be extended I will let you know.

    So how does it sound?
     
  2. Illegal Danish

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    it sounds great I will download asap
     
  3. KGameLover1

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    It's not free anymore, so IDK what to write.
     
  4. Drkdstoyer

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    They are going to change the price soon, so be patient lol
     
  5. nikhsterboi

    nikhsterboi Well-Known Member

    its not free though. Why?? I will review it and am interested
     
  6. stubbornmoose

    stubbornmoose Well-Known Member

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    I have requested a price update to "Free" 4 hs ago. Usually it takes approximately 1 hr to refresh those updates in AppStore. But this time it takes unusually longer. Don’t worry, just wait couple of hours, it should be updated soon.
     
  7. Foozelz

    Foozelz Well-Known Member

    Hey moose, can I just send you a review since my iTunes just makes me sign in, and when I do, It makes me sign in again......and again........and again......!
    IDEA!
    I'll send it to my email, and then upload review on AppStore on iPod!
     
  8. stubbornmoose

    stubbornmoose Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, send it to me or post it here. Actually I would prefer to see it here. And don't bother submitting it to iTunes, that is not necessary
     
  9. SunriseMoon

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    A story in story form, or our ideas for the story of the game?
     
  10. stubbornmoose

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    Stories for this game. Right now there is no story line at all, just move around and kill everyone. How about you have to save your girlfriend trapped in a bus somewhere. Then go and save your parents living on the next street or another city, destroy a shopping mall that has 1000 zombies in it already. The number of zombies is rising with every minute ….. and so on. Try to make it by levels and logically connected. I can do some animations in between the levels etc.
     
  11. Foozelz

    Foozelz Well-Known Member

    STORY(More in EDIT)

    Chapter 1 "The one called 'Jim' "

    Your in a secured town, population 1,034. Your running out of supplies, ammo, and other important items. They send you to scout the land OUTSIDE the town for supplies, they gave you a gun, with little ammo. They say there farewells and send you off. The first place you go to is the roads near the mountains. You find a house, search inside for zombies, none....You find a TV with a scrambled picture on it, but you don't bother to car what it was. You then find a radio...you turn it on.....static.....right before you turn it off.....a voice is heard through the radio.....its saying something about a 'checkpoint'.
    You turn the radio off, and raid the fridge. Then you hear a faint cry, seems to be coming from the closet.....It's a man, who goes by the name Jim. You help him scout the house for his family, which you find dead in the basement. Jim asks you if he can go along, and you say 'yes', You head back to the town to deliver the food.

    Chapter 2 "Alas, Poor Zombie"
    You get sent to the zombie infested city, but its a long walk, so you find a car. Jim will be driving it, and you in the passenger seat.
    Jim drops you off at a safe place where no zombies are, and tells you he will pick you up north of the city. You walk past run down buildings. Then with a sudden noise, 3 zombies popped out and chase you. You kill them and enter the building they came from, You see another radio...with the same person talking on it......he's now talking about the outbreak of zombies, and where the originated from. You hear a strange noise around the corner, you pull out the gun. Then a bird is seen around the corner, but this bird did not seem normal, it had overbite with sharp teeth and glowing yellow eyes.
    The bird starts to attack you, and you kill it. You find a door, and exit out. You hear fast running some where near you, then zombies rush out from a fire dept. building. You kill them. You go into the fire dept. building and scout for food. You raid the fridge and pick up a Fire Axe (Weapon), You find better clothing to wear (Have option to put it on, or save it)
    You exit the back end of the Fire Dept. and you hear satanic laughing. Then you hear Jim yelling. You start running towards the noise, There is a devil like creature about to attack Jim, then your start shooting at the devil like creature to get its attention. Now the devil-creature is running after you. You kill it. You then ask Jim if he is hurt and he say no. You say to Jim to go back to the car and hide. Jim quickly goes into the car, you find one more house and raid its fridge. and find a Desert Eagle.
    You get back in the car and head back for town\

    Chapter 3 is coming (More in EDIT)
     
  12. Dodger123

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    #12 Dodger123, Jan 8, 2010
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    My story. (edit, when new levels come)


    The WZK (World Zombie Killers) is an organization to defead the earth against zombies.
    It was foundet 2005, when the fist zombie was "born" by the crazy scientist "Alkatas"
    1.7.2005: The famous military scientist Alkatras studys with dead cells. He trys to reanimate dead cells.
    29.8.2005: Alkatras could invent a liquid, which reanimates dead cells.
    1.9.2005: The first experiment with a dead human.
    2.9.2005: The army bans the experiment and let Alkatras go, because of too much dangers.
    5.9.2005: Alkatras continues his experiments and creates a big army of zombies, to conquer the world.
    17.9.2005: The first zombie invasion could stopped by some bold man, who founded later the WZK.
    Alkatras could flee....

    You are the best Zombie-Killer "John" and you get some missions from your boss.


    Level 1 Dead Woods

    The crazy scientist is there again. His big zombie army came with him. Alkatras is at the moment in the forest near of the little town Dead Woods. The local police was already there to stop the invasion, but there were too much zombies. An cry for help with the radio reached the WZK-Heaquarters. You have to find him and kill him forever.

    -After the level-

    The scientist escaped, before John could kill him. You don't know where he is now, but at the moment the world is save. But how long...?

    Level 2 Creepy Town

    An underground laboratory anatomizes zombies, who were brought to them by the WZK. At their last experiment, a zombie could escape from his cell and killed nearly all employees, who are now zombies, too. They found a way out of the laboratory and conquered the town Sowana.
    You have to stop the zombie invasion.

    -When Alkatraz appears-


    John: Ahh there you are again.
    Alkatraz: Oh. My little friend. Are you trying again to stop the invasion ?
    John: I already stopped it.
    Alkatraz: No, it has just begun. *evil laugh*

    - After the level -


    John killed the scientist and talks with his boss. After the call he turns back to the him, but he disappeared. He wasn't dead. He and some zombies could escape again.


    Level 3 - Haunted House

    5 month later: After the last fight with Alkatras nothing happened anymore. No zombie was sighted and Alkatras wasn't there anymore. John's boss is happy about that situation and sends him home to his family.
    John hasn't seen his wife and his two little childreen since 1 year now, because of his job ath the WZK.
    When John arrives at home (an old farm) he notices something strange: An black car is standing next to the garage. The front door of his house is open, and blood covers the veranda.
    What happend ?
    John enters the house with his gun. Suddenly the door closes on its own. It is locked and John can't get out.
    With his fingers at the trigger he goes down the floor. John hears some strange noises out of the living room...

    - When you have killed any boss at the upper floor -


    Alkatras: Hahahahaha.
    John: Alkatras, you sick bastard !
    Alkatras: Welcome home my friend.
    Johnu: What happened to my family.
    Alkatras: Ohh.... Your nice wife and those cute two babies ? I have killed them. *evil laugh*
    John: DIE !!

    -Alkatras runs away -


    Level 4 - Extreme Fight

    John: I have to find Alkatras.
    John: Oh my... more zombies.

    -When Alktatras appears -

    Alkatras: You are annoying.
    John: You are dead now.
    Alkatras: Dream on.

    - When Alktatras is dead -


    John: Finaly he is dead.
    John: Whats this ? A letter.


    Mission 5 - Be free or die

    Letter:
    John: Mary.... she lives..... .
    John: That is.... incredible.
    Zombie: Urhchrlll....
    John: Oh no. More zombies.
    John: I have to get out of this house.
    John: I have to be free, or I will die.
    John: TAKE THIS ZOMBIES !!

    - when you have killed the big fat zombie (or any other boss enemy ^^) -

    John: Pew! I am out of this hell.
    John: Now I have to find Mary.

    _____________________________________________________________________________________________
    HERE ARE THE FURTHER LEVEL IDEAS. A DESCRIPTION OF THE SCENERY IS INCLUDED ;)
    LEVEL 6 - Plane Panic
    Scenery: A devastated plane. At the windwos you can see lightnings.

    After John escaped out of his house, he flies to the WCK-Headquarters.
    The plane flys into a thunderstorm and there is some trouble in the plane.
    When he comes out of the toilet (sry but I find this idea funny :D) all passengers are zombies. (Explanation in a later level)
    John: Ohhhh.... why this shit always happens to me.
    John: I have to reach the cockpit.

    - After you have killed an boss -

    John: That was madness.
    John: *knocking at the cockpit door*
    Pilot: Hey what should this terrible noise ?
    John: Ahh you are not a zombie.
    Pilot: Wh...What ??? Z...Z....Zombies ?!
    John: Calm down. They are dead now. When we will land ?
    Pilot: In 10 minutes.


    Level 7 - The Journey
    An dark and spooky forest. There is much fog.

    At the WZK-headquarters all people are excited of the things, which happed at John's house. They tell him, that the only possible location the secret laboratories under Sowana is (Level 2)
    John and 6 other WZK-Members go to Sowana. In the Forest of Sowana he gets lost and he can't find the group. His radio doesn't work in the forest, too.

    John: Ahh. Souch a crap. I have to find my group
    Zombie: Brahrrrl...
    John: Ohhh sure..... there have to be zomibes. But I think, we seek at the right location.

    - After the level -
    John stands in front of a strange wall out of rosty steel.

    Radio: Krzrzrzrz.....
    John: Hello ? Can anyone hear me ??
    Radio: Krzrzr.... John ? .. Krzrzrzr
    John: Dave ? Do you hear me ? I have seen zobies.
    Radio: Krzrzr.... Yes, we too ... krzrzr.... Where are you ?
    John: I am in front of a wall. I think it's the wall of the laboratory.
    Radio: Krzrzrz.... Follow the wall to the entry.... krzrzr..... we wait there.
    John: Ok Dave. I come.


    Level 8 - Laboratory of Death
    Long corridors with strange numbers on the wall.
    Some big glass panes, behind big white chambers with a desk, where dead zombies are liyng.
    The walls are full of blood.

    When John found the entry to the laboratories no-one was there. Only a trail of blood leads in to the darkness.
    John: Oh my god. What happened ?
    John: I have to go in and rescue them.
    John: Wait Mary. Soon I have saved you.

    - After the level -

    John could survive all zombie attacks in this big labyrinth of corridors and you have reached a zombie-free room.
    In the corne sits a scientist, he is very scared.

    John: Hey. What happened ?
    Scientist. Oh my god. Everything went wrong.
    John: ?
    Scientist: Alkatras discovered a new liquid. It shoud reanimate dead cells, but
    the test subjects didn't behave like normal zombies. They were clever. They could speak and act like
    normal humans. They were very clever. They could deactivate the security system and killed us all.
    John: What the hell !
    Scientist: There are 3 intelligent zombies now. Please help me.
    John: Where's my family ?
    Scientist: *swallow*
    John: WHERE IS MY FAMILY ?
    Scientist: Your family..... . They are.... the intelligent zombies.

    Level 9 - Lost ?
    The same scenery how in level 8

    John: No... . No... . That can't be !
    Scientist: I am sorry...
    John: SHUT UP !
    Scientist: Er.... there is an remedy, but it isn't tested.
    John: Where is it ?
    Scientist: It isn't tested already there could be some adverse reactions.
    John: I don't care, it could rescue my falmily.
    Scientist: It's in room RL-T88
    John: Where is that room ?
    Scientist: At the lowermost level.
    John: How can I reach this ?
    Scientist: With the ..... graaawl..... ugh...this bite hurts..... .
    John: What ?
    Scientist: With the elevator.
    Craahhhchrlll......
    Suddenly the scientist turns into an zombie. He attacks John, but he can shoot him down.

    -After the level -

    John: Ahh the elevator.
    John: I hope I can find the remedy.


    Level 10 - Unexpected Events
    Same scenery how level 8 and 9

    John: So where is the room RL-T88 ?
    John: Here's a map. Oh.... at the end of the corridor.

    After John has reached room RL-T88 he seeks for the remedy.
    He finds it and want to leave the room to find his family, but suddenly.

    You: Oh no more zombies.

    - After the Level -

    John: Where could Mary and the children be ?
    John: Hey in this cell is a letter.


    Please read at the next post for further levels ;)
    Part II:

    http://forums.toucharcade.com/showpost.php?p=781511&postcount=21
     
  13. stubbornmoose

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    #13 stubbornmoose, Jan 8, 2010
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    Sorry Dodger123 I forgot to mention. I am planning to remove a devil from the scene. A lot of people have asked me to. It doesn't really fit into the zombies game, my bad ;). I will replace it with some infected boss that actually may throw a fire balls at you or something like that.

    Unless of course you really think it makes sence. It is your story though ;). Anyway I will ask a committee to abstract more from the scene and the devil will be easily replaced with an infected super powered boss or something like that during their voting.
     
  14. Dodger123

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    OK. I will replace the devil and the hell, if you have other enemys ;)
     
  15. SunriseMoon

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    Wait, so he wins?
     
  16. SunriseMoon

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    #16 SunriseMoon, Jan 8, 2010
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    Level 1, Dead Woods
    It's been four years. Four years without encountering a single living human. What happened so long ago? You don't remember. All you remember is a name, and...Them...

    Level 2, Scary Town
    That name...It haunts you...They haunt you. The name...What was it again? Oh yes, Craig...Dr. Craig...He sent the letter that led you here...That accursed letter that brought you to this accursed country.

    Level 3, Haunted House
    The letter was sent so long ago, you aren't sure if he is still here...You walk in, not bothering to knock, for you know They are still coming for you, you can't waste time. You find Craig crouching on the ground with a shotgun. He probably heard you enter and thought you to be a zombie. You both silently rejoice that the other is alive, and then you get down to business...

    Level 4, Extreme Fight
    Dr. Craig: This vial holds the liquid vital for your survival. I have already taken half of it's contents. This liquid could change a zombie back into a fully alive human, but there is only enough for one more person. If you take it, it will prevent you from turning into a zombie.
    You: But that would mean the end of the human race except for me and you! That would mean there is no hope!
    Dr. Craig: I'm sorry, but...It appears that there is no hope...
    Suddenly, a large zombie crept up behind Dr. Craig and killed him.
    Dr. Craig: Grab...the vial...and escape...before...They get...you!

    Level 5, Be Free or Die
    "...the end of the human race..."
    "...no hope..."
    Those sentences ring in your mind over and over. Finally, you stand up and grab the vial. At this point, you are ready to try anything. You take the vial to the city water plant, fighting zombies all the way. You reach the place where it will do the most damage (to the zombies) and crush the vial into the water. You hear a scream behind you. It's Them. They have caught up with you, and you knew it would happen. You grab your shotgun and say "Why are you here?" knowing that you will receive the answer you know, and you dread. Many voices answer in unison "You have something we want...That vial. GIVE US THE VIAL!" You know exactly the way you should answer them, and grab your shotgun.
     
  17. stubbornmoose

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    Not yet ;). One or two stories is not enough to define a winner ;)

    This contest will be closed not earlier than Monday. So, hurry up!!! ;)
     
  18. Dodger123

    Dodger123 Well-Known Member

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    Boahh..... added level 3-5.
    Edited level 1 and 2. Total new concept ^^
    And some suggestions level 6-8
    More to come ;)
     
  19. SunriseMoon

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    #19 SunriseMoon, Jan 8, 2010
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    Added level 2 and 3.
     
  20. stubbornmoose

    stubbornmoose Well-Known Member

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    I need a couple of volunteers to create a committee that will select a winner. C’mon it will be fun. Obviously you won’t be allow to vote for your own story;)
     

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